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by WingsofaDream

person Elphaba
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter! I notice that Harry hasn't told anyone about seeing Moldy erem Voldy
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nah, May 9th. 14 days. I'm always watching for your update. In fact, I've been checking since late yesterday afternoon for this one! I was so happy I read it today though, because IT'S SNOWING! Freaking April 25, and it's SNOWING!!! God hates me...

You can be my mistress (of fanfiction). We just can't tell my fiance. *shifty eyes*

This was amazing. I actually teared up when Fenrir said Harry could get comfort from Remus since he (Fenrir) wouldn't be there if Harry woke up screaming. I wanted to cry! I was so sad, and I thought Harry would cry too. And Fenrir was such an arse. I completely understand why he was upset, completely. But still! It was Harry! Poor, little Harry! I was so happy that Remus had stepped up to help Harry in that office, but I knew as soon as Fenrir turned around that it wasn't good anymore. And I like that Harry has his own opinions. I'm sad that Sirius was able to tell Draco to shove off, but I'm glad that Harry was able to set his godfather mostly straight about butting into Harry's life. I'm loving the story (duh!) and the characters (which are awesome) and just how... realistic this fic could be. I mean, these are real things. I can see Harry being wistful about his time in the wilderness with Fenrir, and missing Isaac, and being afraid of magic, and trying to please everyone, etc. etc. etc. It just works. Keep it up, hun, your writing's amazing. ~dpa06~
person AHHHHHHH!!!!!
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Bridal"!!!!! NO!!! The biggest clich
person qwerty
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! About time Harry told (well Fenrir forced him to tell) what was going on. I'm glad that Remus was the sensible one and realized what was going on with Harry. Go Remus!
I'm glad that Harry and Hermione are friends now. But the fact that Harry sees Voldemort's figure on Hogwarts ground from the corner of his eye is creepy. Harry seriously needs to tell Fenrir about that.
Great chapter!
person Coobs
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love it :P
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so this isn't a review. I just realized something and had to share it with you. You update every other weekend, right? Of course, you already know this. However, I get married on May 9. And you're posting that weekend. I'm so excited! You're going to update on the same weekend as my wedding! What an amazing wedding present! Sorry, I just had to share that. I was getting excited because you're updating this weekend, and then I realized you'd also be updating on my wedding weekend. And I was even more excited. And then I had to share with you.

You probably think I'm on crack right now.




You're only mostly right... ~dpa06~
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love this story please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lovs ya
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person Rokkis
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not totally understanding why Harry doesn't want to bother his alpha with the vision. But what is more surprising is Fenrir allowing it. Yeah, sure he is in love with Harry, but he's still alpha and the well-being of his pack should be his number one priority! Despite Harry's childish rebellion or whatever.
As for Sirius.... nope. Don't like him anymore. But you did manage to make Sirius character more real with the whole photos and desperate attempt to bring Harry to him or make him dependent on him. Must say I am hoping for a telling off soon. Truly believe that Harry can only take so much prejudice and coercion before he too breaks. Also hope Albus is in for a good dressing down, especially considering the different treatment between Fenrir and Lupin. Can't see that it really inspires Harry that the wizarding world is the place for him!
Anyway, looking forward to the next update and hope you had a lovely Easter holiday. \

Cheers!
person Kuromei
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't imagine Dumbledore forcing Harry to learn magic and succeeding. Not when Harry himself doesn't want to. But what happens when (or if) Harry learns that the connection is a two-way thing? Severus might have to teach him Occlumency after all. X3

Another great chapter, just like the ones before. ;3 *hugs Dream-sama*
person Sirin Black
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hope you had a good easter, i of course ate way to much chocolate :P
this chapter was excellent as always :D can't wait for the next one!!