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by WingsofaDream

person Kuromei
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the double review, but I really need to amend something in my last post. ^__^;; I said that the last updated on on the 27th, but it was really on the 23rd. My bad. X( I was thinking of your other HP fic.

Feel free to delete this post if you want, Dream-sama. I really had to correct myself. *hugs*
person Darkless
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, no bumbling Lockheart this time! Yay!

Poor Harry, realising how dangerous it could be to others near him, found the maturity to tell Draco to 'stay away'. Draco seemed crushed.

Hmmm....wonder how this will clash with Fenrir's ultimatum to Harry to, "do not talk to snakes, ever again!" (or something to that effect)

Looks like fun be a-commin'!
person Sirin Black
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter! sirius is in biiiig trouble lol i loved the little scene between fenrir and harry when fenrir was all protective and stuff while in werewolf form :D
person Sirin Black
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
then they had headed into the living room and did as they always did when they first woke up; eat. The house-elves ...when i first read this i missed the period and so read it as, they eat the house-elves when they first get up LOL i was like what!!? then i clued in :P though it would be funny if they did :D
awesome chapter as always!
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol. only if you prefer those big, huge, cuddly, dogs over little, mean ones. XD
person Spiros
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a lovely chapter... I'm surprised though, that the diary hadn't been heard from before Harry had made it to Hogwarts. Lucius Malfoy is a sneaky bastard. :O
person qwerty
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I really LOVE that you'll be updating weekly now. I'm so excited!
I don't think this chapter was full of "stuff" that had to happen. You're being too hard on yourself!
I liked how Harry is playing matchmaker between Ron and Hermione - nice, cute fluff intermixed with the struggles Harry undergoes.
Harry finally met Lucius Malfoy! I know Fenrir was sleeping at the time but does Harry tell Fenrir that he met Lucius? And Remus took the fall for Fenrir! I hope that Harry will continue to develop his relationship with Remus despite this setback.
I'm glad Harry isn't eager to forgive Sirius. I know that Sirius had a tough life but like you said, bad move Sirius.
Anyway, great chapter! Can't wait for next week!
person kati
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
;) We can keep a whole kennel of them if you like. lol I have three already, what's a couple hundred more?

Unfortunately, I didn't really like this chapter much. Sorry. (I still love yooouuuuu!)

It was just a bit, um... lifeless? I don't know; we all already know about Riddle's diary and all that and not much happened. But sometimes you need these fillers to make a story work, so I won't hold it against you. :D

~Kati-chan
person Elphaba
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Harry can never get away from that diary can he! LOL
person kelsin
schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very nice chapter. Im so excited about the weekly updates!