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for Sacrifice

by WingsofaDream

person kati-chan
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooooh! I like this turn of events. Though fenrir can be a complete poo-head, y'know? I hope he eventually sees that magic isn't all bad.
person Spiros
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...I think I was gonna have a heart attack or something cause I thought Fenrir died. Poor Harry's being a ball of angst lately. XD
person Blood Lust 777
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! No way! Flight of Death's pet got Fenrir.
*cries* *shifts and starts howling*

Now I wanna skew me some basilisk.
person Lina03
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And so the plot thickens...wonderful story, I can't wait for more. About your question, I would like the combined chapters, if they are that short might as well just make it a single one.
person Kuromei
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yahoo! I'm a few days late, but I got to read the chapter! And may I say that the integration of in-canon dialogue is a bonus. ;3 Especially Myrtle's. X3

Is Harry going to get help this time? Will he take the journal to someone? Even *gulp* Dumbledore? XP

*shrug* I'll jsut have to stay tuned and find out, won't I? ;3 *hugs Dream-sama*
person Spiros
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I kind of feel sorry for Draco, for all that he's a poncy stuck up brat who's had his views greatly influenced by his overly sneaky father... But Fenrir/Harry is better than Draco/Harry. Just because it's overrated. XD
person qwerty
schedule May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Detective Harry is on the case! lol
I kinda feel sorry for Draco...he has romantic feelings for Harry but they won't ever be returned. I know Fenrir is bloody possessive about Harry, and he won't react favorably to Draco wooing Harry.
Great chapter! Keep going!
person BloodLust 777
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Something wicked this way comes......Amazing Chapter by the way, and that Kingsley i starting to bug my brain.
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry. I think chocolate cake is the yummiest thing in the world, not coffee. I even hate the smell...

Wow. I loved this chapter. I love the way you're manipulating things so it kinda works with JK Rowling's PoA, but it's also your own story completely. Draco is giving his "I'm a Pureblood, so ha!" speech; Hermione's in the library; Fenrir hates Aurors and wizards; Dumbledore and the other professors are worried about the Chamber of Secrets - Wait. I just realized. You've mixed the Chamber of Secrets and the Prisoner of Azkaban together. That could prove interesting. And Harry's... 13? So it's supposed to be PoA, but you've thrown CoS in to have a villain? I'm not really sure what you're doing now. I had things mostly figured out, and now I'm lost. Congrats. Not many people can throw me off like that. And I hope Harry does make up with Sirius, eventually. They need each other. But I don't think it should be until Sirius realizes WHY, exactly, Harry is so upset with him.

I vote for one chapter instead of two short ones. I'm greedy, and although I want it to last longer, I'll be more upset with two smaller chapters than one big one. ~dpa06~
person Kuromei
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I missed two chapters! Not only that, but chapter 27 was posted on my birthday, the 27th! XD How cool is that? ^w^ Even if the basilisk is now on the loose. XP I have to wonder how Harry's going to handle it... *shrug* I'll just have to stay tuned, won't I? ;3

Seeing as how it's Thursday, I'll be seeing you Saturday! And every Saturday after that. X3 Squee! *hugs Dream-sama*