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for A Dark Scenario

by Ms_Figg

person ingah troconiz
schedule December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it`s a good history, hope you actualize soon
person Trish
schedule December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the start of this one. Okay, it was a dark beginning - thus the title - but things are working themselves into a wonderfully detailed drama. I do love that aspect of your writings. Carry on...QUICKLY!! **smiling**
person Laura
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh you keep getting me hooked on stories. Please more soon Ms Figg ^_^ I'm liking the way this one is going..

But poor Snape..And all those books T_T I'd have a breakdown if ll of my books had been lost in a fire! And I'm sure I don't own anything of value like Severus would...Bet Hermione will pitch a fit..
person sevsheart
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, plese right more!
person jaimelee
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh this seems like a very interesting story indeed... I can totally see Ron going off the deep-end... Can you make Ron the bad guy again? ;-) I'd love for Ron to be jerk, and Hermione choosing to be with Severus. Great work!
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue with this story. You can make it a great story!
person Elphaba
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked it! Ron a putz imagine that!
person Sandlapper
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ms Figg...if you write it I will read it!! This has the potential to be one of your best with the way you handle the characters. I can see Ron assaulting Hermione right there in the courtroom screaming "are you a deatheater too?" and trying to shove her sleeve up. What WOULD Severus do?
Great tease, my dear, look forward to more if you choose!
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I would love to see Ron's reaction to the truth once they all leave the Ministry! I'll bet he turns into the world's biggest ass. But then, I have never liked Ron, but still, I would think that people would at least try to understand why she made that decision. Most women would, I think. Can't wait for your pen to write us some more of the story!
person Yuki
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very dark, but interesting direction. Update soon? Please tell me this isn't the end. =)