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for Make a Wish

by NormanCharles

person KaelHyun
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Vary interesting Harry is distracting the DE by keeping one of there Lieutenants(sp) busy and stopping Narcassesa(sp) from helping the hell spawn that is Draco Malfoy
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I imagine it would be very confusing for someone to be subjected to a chain of orgasms for seemingly no reason at all. Well done.
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A little confused Are the clones still linked to the original women, and is Harry gonna break it eventually? Great stuff none the less.
person Leria
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An absolutely AWESOME story thus far. The thing about the older Bellatrix and Narcissa being homonculi is a good thing, though homunculi are NOT soulless... they have a soul, but it is but a silver of the one in the real person's body in most cases, according to the old religions.
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, another chapter, and yet the plot thickens. Who are the real Black sisters? And how will the pain in the asp react losing his precious Bella? This Mewtwo shall be waiting for the next chapter.
person KaelHyun
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Vary good story I realy cant wate to read more
person vannilla
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i LOVE THIS CHAPTER
the sex is steamy
and if thats not a cliff hanger i dont know what is!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person vannilla
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow so much happend
the chat
the sacking of umbrige and fudge
the slytherin sacking(my fave)
that was so hot the way he came in to the dungeons and demanded all attention!!!!!!!!
hahahaa take that snape and suck on it!
oh minervas wardrobe!!
millcents firt time!
so sweet!
ok next chapter now!!
person vannilla
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg
cliff hanger again
you naughty naught author!!!!!
your chapter seem to get more and more interesting as this story continues!!!!
ok duel was awesome
harry revealing himself wizardgamot rocked
the scene at the infirmary so touching
how astarte returned voldy's pain to him was amazing
and the end is omg ....ok ive wasted enough time BACK TO THE STORY!!!!!!!
person vannilla
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
better and better
sex scenes are nothing short of tantalizing
myrtle being preggers is oh so amazing!!
and so sweet
haha harry's speech about his part in it and his pleasure was halarious!!!!!
oh i do hope lady helena pulls through
nice ending by the way