rate_review Reviews

All I gotta say is Dayum! Harry is one lucky orphan. To be shagging 21 different ladies..wow.
Can't wait to see the next chapter

Sorry about the double....I just wanted to say I loved an early chapter and a joke Hermione told.

How does a girl hold her liquor?????

By his ears!!!!!

ROTFLMAO....just want you to know when I told my hubby that joke I about busted a lung laughing so hard.

This story is way better then most HP sex based fanfiction I have read. The story has a plot, more then most stories can claim and it raises a lot of intersting idea's like Harry's cloak giving a ghost body. The bellatrix and Narcissa body double idea isn't to bad either, even if this author wasn't the first to use it. The idea of rejuvinations, at the cost of the persons magic is a great idea to, way better then the all to common youth potions lot of fics use.

Sex scenes are both varied in location and what hte characters do, the actual act of sex maybe a little bland but at least it is not 'stick it in and jiggle it around' instant satisfaction like a lot of fics do.

In the end while the story isn't perfect I can't wait for the next chapter. So very few adult HP fics out there of any quality that are not yaoi.

Ah, good, delicious, lemony, smut. Ya can't beat that. Of course that means there will be more plot developments next chapter. This Mewtwo will be waiting on the next chapter.

Chapter 4, another great chapter mate, I love how the story is going and on how you work Myrtle into the story, I think you're the only one that I know of that do Harry/Myrtle story and for that I thank you for doing this.

I like that Harry is going to get a coven of woman, lucky bastard.

I really love this story!

Another great chapter!

OH! Love it

YAY
IM SOOOO GLAD THE NEXT CHAPTER IS HERE!!!!!!!


so draco and narcissa are at snapes house,well their safe.
draco is such a lil prat,he would take that path lol

wow...thats a different version of snow white,although i must agree with harry,she went through labor but woke up from breast feeding??!!!
lol
awww he was her first kiss
the sex between him and the sisters was hot!!!!
yay their awake
hahaha voldys impotent ,i guess resurrection has its drawbacks
narcissa's little bit at the end was very good

write more please,this story is way too good!!!!!

Let's see, which choice did he make...,number 2 of course. That's simple enough.

Hmmm, the older versions of the sisters can feel what their younger selves feel while coupling with Harry.

Two more witches added to the coven, and Snape's turning against Sir Snakeface.

This Mewtwo will be waiting for the next chapter.

Another great chapter and I always knew there was a better version of the snow white story!