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for Make a Wish

by NormanCharles

person poohbear74
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just love it so much and this is a great chapter!
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've always wanted to do that when someone wakes me too early :-)

Any chance of a love scene with Asatre?
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, brought in a major plot point from DH...,how will you solve it? Never liked the whole Harry's a horcrux...,but never seen any authro that challenge. This Mewtwo shall be waiting for the next chapter.
person poohbear74
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter but how could he do that to my Harry!
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOooo Not Millie..
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh, a horcrux. Good thinking with her promotion. Hope to see the next chapter next week.
person poohbear74
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story and I really hope that it ends really great!

what I want to knew is if it matters that Patricia is in the story or if she is a fifth year as long as it flows right with the story!, that is anyone who has read this story should care about! and if you will finish it!

I sorry to rant, I just wanted people to know that it should not matter what you do in your story as long as we as readers encourage you to keep going and that we are reading!.
person Leria
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A great new chapter to the story. Hopefully, Millie will come out of her battle with Tom Riddle alive this time... I dare say that I don't want to think what it would do to Harry if Millie died in his home to be.
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story. Keep up the good work. I still find it a little...don't know how to describe the whole "Minnie" situation. It is hard to imagine that she is young. It kind of creeps me out. But the rest of the story I really like. I'm interested to see how the whole "clone" thing works with Cissy and Bella and Draco. And also to see more Snape involved. And wasn't there something in the newer prophecy that a witch will sacrifice herself to save Harry? Unless I am remembering wrong. Maybe Millie is that witch????
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Do you have a visual reference for young Minerva? Hot chapter, not too complex but not a sloppy PWP