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for Make a Wish

by NormanCharles

schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*drip....drip....drip...drip....drip* oh good lord almighty!!!! *blushing with nose bleed central*

oh what a christmas present!!!

great chappie!!!

happy holidays!!!

miko ~_^
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Plot...,smut...,they're both good. I though Harry was going to get it in ch29...,but he certainly got it in a different way in ch30. Avanue Q has got to be the funniest Broadway show out there. This Mewtwo wishes you a Marry Christmas and will wait on the next chapter.
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, thank you very much for the chapter title, now I have the song in my head. I can see everyone present dancing to that Motown sound. I think I'm gone.(VBG) Great addition to an excellent story. Plot and all.

Looking forward to more.

Truly
person poohbear74
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great set of chapters and I can not wait for the rest of it!
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, another good chapter.

Snakeface's weakness is his anger.
Talk about a punishment...,sucks to be him.

This Mewtwo shall wait on the next chapter.
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh, Voldemort's making a

Man, those DMLE guys weren't too bright....,or Harry was just a bit more clever.

This Mewtwo shall wait on the next chapter.
person poohbear74
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter and the plot thickens!
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bella went on a small rampage their.

Mmmm, looks like Tonks might be joining later as well.

This Mewtwo shall wait for the next chapter.
person poohbear74
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter and I hope Tonks does go with Harry.
person KaelHyun
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
To the idiots here: the Elder Narsacessa and Bellatrix are the Clone/ Humunculi