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for Make a Wish

by NormanCharles

schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapters one through ten

I love, love, LOVE this story!

It is VERY well written with an awesome plot, great character development and interaction, and let us not forget FANTASTIC SMUT! Did I forget to mention that I love this story?! LOL
;~D

Q: You know what the real mind blower is?
A: This story could very well be use as a guide to great sex for the beginner and those wanting to improve their technique.

Seriously, I wish to the gods that my first sexual partner had the guidance that Harry received from Mrytle as to how to deflower a girl, not to mention how to please her in the process. Know what I mean?

By the Gods, this story should be MANDATORY reading for boys 13 years old and up (through their 50s or so--LOL)!

EXTREMELY well written--keep up the good work!
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice plot twist, great sex. Can't wait for Harry's time with the Goddess.
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter!

Why is Ginny willing to do that!
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an extremly well-written smutty story. I don't know if you are Wiccian/Pagan but you write like one, and it's nice to meet a fellow pagan/wiccian, right? Update when you can. Brightest Blessings.
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol, Pansy's impression of a mad sailor was good for grins. Uh oh, the real one is about to be awaken. Very interesting twist. This Mewtwo shall wait on the next chapter.
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOW COLD YOU!

IT CAN NOT END LIKE THIS!BUT THIS IS A GREAT CHAPTER!
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Arg! A cliffy! Well, there went Voldy's last horcrux. He'll become extremely desperate now. This Mewtwo will wait for the next chapter, but hopefully not too long. :)
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man, Nagini had me teary-eyed. Very good chapter!
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope you ha a happy new year!

Another great set of chapters!
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Time for a little snake hunt. 2 of ever how many Harry will havehave been born. Looks like fang face won't be living too much longer.