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by NormanCharles

schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yap!, still love it!

Can't wait for the rest of the story!
person Leria
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, the story was great until the feminist bullshit at the end of the latest chapter of the story. The fact is that women can be JUST AS, if not more, destructive than men can be. It's time to realize that in this world and stop saying that "Men are so wiolent!" when the truth is that ANY human can be extremely violent.
I'd honestly like a re-write of that last part of the story, to be honest, to acknowledge that fact.
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol. I am loving this story. And the last line... Mwahahahaha! Priceless.
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"what could be more powerful than the god of chaos?" "SEX"

i just loved this last few lines!! i repeated them to hubby and HE LAUGHED!!! YAHOO!!

another notch to the belt! awesome chappie!!

laters!!

miko ~_^
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
tub of olive oil, a ceiling fan and a trapeze
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i just can't wait for the rest of this story I just love it so much !!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story and I cannot wait for the next chapter.
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
For one moment, I thought you were about to kill off Voldemort with a fish bone...,talk about irony! Guess that fish was tougher than Voldie suspected huh? This Mewtwo shall wait on the next chapter.
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Complicated. Pity the fishbone couldn't have done the job, that would have been almost perfect. Will wait for more!
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapters eleven through twenty-eight

I love how passionate this story is throughout every chapter.

The dedication and love shown between Harry and his ladies is heartwarming and enviable (spelling?), and very well written.

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RE: chapter twenty-eight

I LOVE the punishment that was assigned to 'Sasha the Cossack'--poetic justice can be such a b!tch, hey? LOL

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Each and every chapter is a complete pleasure to read. I find myself so engrossed in the story, that I keep clicking on the 'Next Chapter' in anticipation to find what will happen next.

Well done--keep up the good work!