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August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! so sad! I love fred and george so much. Halfway through the story I was actually crying over a fanfiction. You captured some very raw emotions that are so identifiable that they just wash over you and you truely feel the agony of harry. the title is crude at first, but after the explanation, it fits perfectly. nicely done, it was excellent.
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad in the greatest way. Good job :)
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May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this fic; it was wonderfully written with enough emotion to gut your reader. It ended off exceptionally as well but i wouldn't mind seeing a short blurb on Charlies reaction to Harry's death. Again please keep up the great work.
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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really do like this story. One really does get a very good sense about the characters and what they are feeling. I also like the title. It's really eye-catching, especially to those of us whose seen the movie. If anything that could be done to improve this fic I would have to say that it would be an explanation as to why George took his life after making love to Harry, but seeing as the story is in Harry's POV, I can't see how you would fit that in. Again, I do like the story. It has very, very good composition. ~M.A. Silverwolf~
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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's too sad...
I really cried...poor, poor Harry and George and all of them...
but great story all the same!
I really cried...poor, poor Harry and George and all of them...
but great story all the same!
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh. That was seriously good.
I'm just thinking on how George and Harry reacted, and I'm thinking it was highly realistic. Not many people these days have two lovers, and are in a relationship that consists of three people, so to compare how they actually would react is something almost impossible to do. But if you think of a 'normal' situation, if one person loses their lover, they are depressed, mostly don't want to have any contact with other people, wouldn't even dream of being in another relationship. So it's definitely feasible to me to think that George and Harry would drift apart. But I don't get why George killed himself after making love to Harry. Surely he could see that he still has love and something to live for in this world, he has Harry? And how could he do that, how could he leave Harry alone to deal with not only Fred's death but his own as well, especially after seeing how bad Harry was from just the loss of one of his lovers?? Sorry, I don't have much sympathy for suicide's, and I know in some cases it's almost impossible to be strong and it's just something you have to do because you can't keep living, but at the same time, there are always people who love you and care about you that you will be hurting. And this goes for Harry as well. I know that Charlie and Harry weren't intimate in your story, but Charlie took on the role that Harry played at Fred's funeral, and now that Harry's gone and killed himself as well, how does Harry know that his actions aren't going to affect Charlie the way he was affected when Fred died, and that Charlie wont go and kill himself next, or go into a deep depression? But when your depressed enough to considered and follow through with killing yourself, I don't think you're really thinking rationally or about other people. Some say they're being selfish for killing themselves, and others say we're being selfish for not accepting that this is something they needed, but either way, at the end of the day we're all still left with another dead person and people to grieve them. It just doesn't make sense to me.
Sorry that turned into a bit of a rant about suicide. I didn't mean it to be that way, just it was a little thought provoking this fic.
And I see you did reference Drop Dead Fred in the fic!!! I must say it was put into the fic well. I'd imagine seeing a film title like "Drop Dead Fred" so soon after losing someone named Fred who's close to you would be very upsetting. I think I would have run from the store crying, not hired it out. But Harry's always been a weird one, and it suited your purposes to have him rent it :P
OK well, very very good job, keep writing, I enjoyed it immensely.
~gorgeousbowneyes
I'm just thinking on how George and Harry reacted, and I'm thinking it was highly realistic. Not many people these days have two lovers, and are in a relationship that consists of three people, so to compare how they actually would react is something almost impossible to do. But if you think of a 'normal' situation, if one person loses their lover, they are depressed, mostly don't want to have any contact with other people, wouldn't even dream of being in another relationship. So it's definitely feasible to me to think that George and Harry would drift apart. But I don't get why George killed himself after making love to Harry. Surely he could see that he still has love and something to live for in this world, he has Harry? And how could he do that, how could he leave Harry alone to deal with not only Fred's death but his own as well, especially after seeing how bad Harry was from just the loss of one of his lovers?? Sorry, I don't have much sympathy for suicide's, and I know in some cases it's almost impossible to be strong and it's just something you have to do because you can't keep living, but at the same time, there are always people who love you and care about you that you will be hurting. And this goes for Harry as well. I know that Charlie and Harry weren't intimate in your story, but Charlie took on the role that Harry played at Fred's funeral, and now that Harry's gone and killed himself as well, how does Harry know that his actions aren't going to affect Charlie the way he was affected when Fred died, and that Charlie wont go and kill himself next, or go into a deep depression? But when your depressed enough to considered and follow through with killing yourself, I don't think you're really thinking rationally or about other people. Some say they're being selfish for killing themselves, and others say we're being selfish for not accepting that this is something they needed, but either way, at the end of the day we're all still left with another dead person and people to grieve them. It just doesn't make sense to me.
Sorry that turned into a bit of a rant about suicide. I didn't mean it to be that way, just it was a little thought provoking this fic.
And I see you did reference Drop Dead Fred in the fic!!! I must say it was put into the fic well. I'd imagine seeing a film title like "Drop Dead Fred" so soon after losing someone named Fred who's close to you would be very upsetting. I think I would have run from the store crying, not hired it out. But Harry's always been a weird one, and it suited your purposes to have him rent it :P
OK well, very very good job, keep writing, I enjoyed it immensely.
~gorgeousbowneyes
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn soo sad
crying all the way through it...really, non-stop
...glad it had nothing to do with ur other story
i always hated da fact that fred died
anyway good work
crying all the way through it...really, non-stop
...glad it had nothing to do with ur other story
i always hated da fact that fred died
anyway good work
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Its really good. BOth the story line and the structure
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mood-killing isn't exactly how I would have descirbed it. First off, that is one of my favorite movies so the title intrigued me. Also, there are not a lot of stories about Fred's death, most wish to join the AU and have him alive and well, so I commend you on a brilliant piece of work.
Yes it was sad, but you wrote it beautifully!
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wah! ~crys uncontrollably~ That has to be the most depressing story that I've read to date. But hey, everyone needs a cry once in a while.