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by Silverhair

person Rii
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good so far, cant wait for more
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this idea... and if you don't already have a beta I'm free. I've never beta-ed before but I do love making corrections to atrocious grammar! :-)

My email address is lissagal99@gmail.com.
person Jilliane
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM


Intriguing beginning. Makes me curious for more. Update soon, please!
person sonykit
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey there! chilling start you have here, and i'm not talking about the winter setting, although that was an appropriate touch as well. dark, daunting and makes you really want to pull draco into a hug. he seems so vulnerable even though he puts up such a front. i look forward to learning how he became flint's toy and why he is unable to fight him. i really hope this doesn't turn out to be a pathetic!draco fic. i really find it hard to digest those. anyway, i'm also looking forward to how harry enters the picture. pretty good start you have here - the atmosphere, the dialog and the actions are well written and consistent with each other. nice one. ;)
person R
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far, very well written! I'm really excited to see where this goes, I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*hugs Draco* Poor Draco. And poor Harry! hahaha! Did not know what he was getting into when he tried to be polite! Update please!
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i liked it a lot!
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 2! What happened over the summer? Why doesn't Draco stop Flint?