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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was brilliantly written! Please continue this, it's very hot. :)
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me that you're going to continue this. I know it says oneshot but honey, this is too good not to keep going!! I LOVE IT!
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HELL YES I DEMAND A SEQUEL!!!!! Or series.
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Bad Draco! Poor Hermione! Snape's at fault too, of course--he's entirely too lenient on Draco. "I should give you a real detention"--Ha! I like how Hermione approached detention--very business-like and un-whiny.
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is beautiful! You should make it into a two shot, maybe eleven years later?
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was fabulous. In a word Brilliant! It leaves a reader wanting more *hint,hint* =) Such a piece should be embelished. This is the cake, you should definatly add more frosting. LOVE IT!
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh come on, you gotta add to this. Im begging you.
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was smokin hot! Too bad it's a oneshot! Great story!
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you are amazing!! I just love your style and your way of writing!! keep up the good work:D:D:D
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Evil & hot - that's Draco I guess! Any chance we'll get more? Wouldn't it be interesting if she found a similar spell & placed it on him... please???