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by Felinity

person alma
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Looking good, very different from what I've read so far.
person alma
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person alma
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, I love this story. Although, Hermione originally has brown hair not blond. Is that intentional? There are also some minor spelling errors, like at the end of chapter five there is 'defiantly' instead of 'definitely' but overall I think its great. I can't wait to read the next chapter. XD
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice start. I hope to read more soon.

Keep up the good work.
person Selera
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. Please do post more of it soon!
person gweasley
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please!!! Please up date fast! This is geting realy good and I want more :)
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More please...this is really good so far. I can't wait for the next chapter to be updated.