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Oh, darn......I really hate to have to say this, but.......I liked this story and was really enjoying it, right down to the very last line of Chapter 5....and then came your author's note. I'm sorry, and don't take this as a flame, it's not meant to be, but I have to say, I was terribly disappointed that you didn't have an ending to the story. An ending of your own. You shouldn't have posted the story if you didn't have an ending, and I think it's unfair of you to expect your readers to come up with ideas for you. At the very least, you should have left it as a WIP until you came up with an ending of your own design, rather than relying on your readers to supply one for you. Really, this story had such promise, it had a good start, and except for a few misspellings and typos, it was well written. Perhaps you should have warned us you didn't have a conclusion, although I would think you probably wouldn't have gotten very many hits if you had. Sadly, all I can say now is.....very disappointing.

gah i simply love your story, it's awesome though a part of me thought harry would confess to sev that he almost died without him (literaly) ooo oo maybe in the next chap you could put lemon! and confrontations harry did afterall bardge into the manor plus he abandoned the weasley's

i like what you've written so far i think that sev should eat and harry she have some alone time like the night and realize that he loves sev to but i think they should move in together like yesterday so they can work on their bond

this is just to adorable I like the bond update soon

Wow, I really like this, it's marvellous! Interesting concept, especially about how Snape didn't die. Hope you update soon

OOh, lovely smut for MEEE!

And I'm laughing my ass off at 'Sir Shag-a-lot'. Not to mention Ron's version of what's going to happen when Harry and Snape get in the same room together. LOL!!!

Very good. I like. More please!

thank you thank you for keeping sev alive i love the fact that their bonded please oh please update soon

Okay I admit, at first I thought that this story was just going to be another one of those "poor Harry" suicidal ones from the summary, but it is actually catching my interest. I can't wait for you to update and if you ever need someone to beta e-mail me, I happen to be very good at grammar and all that rot.

Yay smut! And this is good! Poor Harry!

I always know a fanfic's good if I'm teary-eyed. ;)