rate_review Reviews

This was a story that put forth a gallant effort to stay true to the harry potter series... But it failed npthing is wrong with your writing just your knowledge your characterization is waay off. I assume you've read the series but you might to go back and examine the second and sixth book more critically if it was your intention to be ooc I see no problem with this story but if it wasn't.... I hope I don't sound too harsh but Tom is hard character to write about and when he has blue eyes and wavy hair something is wrong. There are allowances that can be made like abraxas being apart of the knights of walpurgis or not because he wasn't apart of the original death eaters but at least your story makes sense and you can actually write, Voldemort is just a character I pay close attention too

P.S. Sorry for being so anal retentive

This story is incredible! And wth is Mione thinking she can stop him from becoming the evil lord voldie? She has to HELP him! If not she loses everything! She isn't dumb so wth? lol Can't wait for an update!

I do hope Flamina get what's coming to her.

I like it so far it's to bad you didn't finish it.

Good Duel! I didn't care for her choice of wardrobe.

I can't wait for chapter 35!

I just finished reading Time Changes All Things right now and I absolutly love it! And I would really really love to read more from it. So I have just one question... Are you going to continue with it? I don't mean to bug you about it or anything, I just really love it :) and I would love to know what happens next :D

But if you don't decide to continue on with it then I totally understand.

Rhea

omg i cannot wait to see what happens! I love this story so much, Tom is such a darling to Hermione.

I certainly enjoyed the little breather from the angst in that last chapter. And I look forward to see how things will progress from here on. I kind of need to reread the story, since I have been taken a break from fanfiction for awhile. I was just fed up with everything Potter related. But recently I started reading and writing HP-fanfics again. So I had like heaps and heaps of chapters to read in a row. Sorry for not reviewing them all, but I just had to continue reading; I kept clicking on the next chapter button, which is a huge compliment all on its own. I certainly like your story. And I look forward to more.

i love this story, but i hate that hermione is turning into a submissive follower. I wish she would be like she was in the beginning of the story! lol But tis your story and you do with it what you will. :P

Keep up the good work. Cant wait for the next chapter. :P