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for Time Changes All Things: Now Complete

by ssdawn

schedule October 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ow, two chappies right behind each other, hurry up with the next one, or noooo it well end soon, huh?!
schedule October 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Still anxious reading more of your more than delightful story
schedule August 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh, Sirius...

Cannot beleive Tom would just forget about getting them to safety, running out of time because of the surprise attack yes...

Oh and KILLLLL the old Farth, Dumbledore needs to be killed by Hermione...

Oooh and cannot beleive you're nearing the end here....

Just have to reread...
person ajenni
schedule August 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I feel like I have been waiting forever for this fic to be done! Love it :)
schedule August 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Kill Dumbledore I hate that git, always have he seemed so cruel to Harry in the books.
Bellatrix!!!

So Dumbledores kills children, he's more eveil than anyone thinks, thank you Arthur for not complying.

Voldemort killing kids well, yes, he is resident evil incarnated, but how is he dealing with it now, having a kid himself?

Need a serious detox when this finishes,.....
schedule July 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Sirius to the rescue. I think it was a bit which him losing faith in Dumbledore. Maybe you could have spend more time panning that one out.


Hermione and Tom are so hot together. I don't want Voldemort dead.... Sick huh?!
schedule July 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hiya, I'm glad you like my reviews. There are a few stories on this site I really enjoy, this one of them. Somehow my reviews are not that detailed or in depth, I imagine English being a second language does that.
Sad to hear the story is winding towards an end.

I feel your first chapters with Hermione transformation had been formidable I like your narrative skills I can picture your characters and decor in my mind.

I do wonder why Dumbledore (whome I loath maybe as much as You do)is up to letting them have their attack plans.
The Lily/James situation is difficult I van imagine. And who will Hermione's baby grow up to be....
schedule July 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well Voldemorts possessiveness with Hermione is so hot!

Lily is right to be angry with James, Dumbledore is the culprit as well.

Ook and James showing some lust for his wife also hot!
person Glo
schedule June 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I have been quietly reading your book for the past couple weeks, I must admit I am quite enthralled by it and I am at the point where I must speak. I am literally obsessed with this story. I have Siri read it to me when I drive to and from work every day. It is riveting! You are enchanting! The quality here is so obvious. In the beginning you mastered the hook and kept my attention when I have never enjoyed het or this pairing, captured their poisoned unhealthy love and that way it is inescapable, and the fact that even in darkness and opposition, she loved still! Yes! It is so complex! You are an artist.

I mean FUCK I just want to write poetry about this story, but you already did when you wrote the story!
It is just SO good! Just, THANK YOU.

And listen, when Harry was born you made it genuine, perfect; and I cried.
person Mc111
schedule June 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!