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for I'm Not in Love

by neelix

person Trelweny
schedule November 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Lovely romance.
My only complaint is Horace taking over for Minerva... considering he was HER potions professor as Minerva was a contemporary of Tom Riddle. So Horace Slughorn should have been first to retire, or in his case return to retirement as his retiring is how Severus got the Potions job in the first place.

Thanks for writing.
person smmz79
schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great fic.. i love that they bumped into each other and love bloomed from that... i also loved the image of a relaxed severus
person Anon
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person DavidL
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A good story overall, very nicely writen. The only quibble I have is them not knowing the others jobs. It's a bit hard to believe the Headmaster of Hogwarts would not know who the current potions professor of Beauxbatons is, especially as potions is his subject. it's even harder to believe the potions mistress of Beauxbatons would not know the identity of the Headmaster of Hogwarts
person noeby
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ha ha. Some nice lines in this. Shame Sev wasn't wearing a black leather jacket!
person noeby
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yummy lemons. V yummy. Cooking, gardens and brilliant sex. Perfect.

Noe
person noeby
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sniff*.ha we know it's only temporary.
person noeby
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
v nice chapter! Sorry trying to type with cat on my arm... tricky.

polite request mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
person noeby
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwww. Nice one neelix. Sweet ending.

noe

person neelix
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Did I end it too quickly? My feeling was that here are two single adults who know most of each others' history, they're not strangers and there was no need to string out the angst, really. I mean... they were in love so why put unnecessary obstacles in their way?

I dunno....what do you think?