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for Undesirable - COMPLETE

by slashpervert

schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loooove this fic. don't know if i've ever commented or said that before....

i about cracked up when harry said "i choose you." made me think of pokemon... "pikachu, i choose you!!" then i went right back to awwwwww. lol
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it!!
person lilly
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe the next chapter is the last! Will there be an epilogue? Will this story turn Mpreg or will they adopt? Do all of Harry's friends know and approve of their relationship? I think they do. haha aww Draco and Harry would have the cutest kids. l;skadfj I don't want this to end! ahaha
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww how cute. Now I want the next chapter but I don't want the story to end but then I do want it to end because I don't want anything bad to happen. lol Great chapter can't wait to see how it ends
person xanniex
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this latest chapter is by far
one othe cutest moments I've ever read.
I'm guessing Harry telling Draco he wanted to move on
in life with him was his way of saying 'I Love You'?
Or is there more beautiful fluff to be given?
Can't wait to read more!!!
:DDD
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yaya draco is loved hehe
person MagicalWinry
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CUTENESS!
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He's trying to move on *gets choked up* How inspiring!
person qwerty
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Harry is finally having good dreams rather than nightmares!
Awesome, fuzzy-feeling chapter!
update!
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww...I'm officially melting. So sweet.