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by slashpervert

person Alle
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES! a new story!
I can't wait to see what happens! I know it will be good if you're writing it! -Alle
person Leentjef
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow very good beginning keep going
and post soooooooooooooooooooon :)
bye bye
person Caldonya
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow.Interesting beginning with Draco. And the scean with Lucius and Voldomort was quite powerful. I'm happy to see you found a way for wizards to whip with the wand.
person Jay FicLover
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mhm, is he in a permanent state of hallucination? May be Voldemort cursed him into that state before he died?

I hope we see more soon!
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, i really like this story so far. I love one's where Draco is the strong one, helping vulnerable Harry.
person Ellanath
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cheers* I am a fan of your writing. Everything that you have written I have at least read 2-3 times. I was so thrilled to see a new story posted here. I could vividly see Harry in his room, rocking, chanting, mumbling. I could see Draco standing there hoping Harry would not respond, and so now I wonder how he will help heal Harry. I am not a big fan of having Harry 'suffer' with Draco as the strong character. I am curious to see how this pans out.

Looking forward to the next chapter!
person Anon
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for having a schefule of updates Ill always check for them and write reviews. Thanx for writing this sounds good.
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You write more? Please?
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Another story from you! And this one sounds sooooooooo good! I cant wait for more!!
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 2!!!