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person Sarah
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A masterpiece. I commend you; writing something of this porportion is not an easy feat. Eloquently written, excellent plot. :)
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to thank you for writting such a wonderful story and I hope you will keep writing. That was one of the best stories I have read in the 3 years that I have been reading Harry Potter fanfiction.
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*still sniffling*... yeah, great great fic. I don't know if you got my last review but it was too long to show up on the page but my muses are gone now anyway. *shrugs and blows nose*. But great job! ^_^ So sad to see it go *waves hankerchief in the air as the story slowly sails away*... *sighs*. Gonna miss you fan-ficcy. Am I making this review long too? Sorry. Guess I'm still procrastinating about writing some more. *shrugs and trudges along hopelessly lost*. ^_^
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww I love it! I love it! I love it!! It was such a good ending and the whole story was great. Job well done!!
person char_marcus
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was an absolutley fantastic story i thoroughly enjoyed it and will be reading more of your work when it comes my way :)
person qwerty
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWW! That was a bittersweet moment when Harry named the dog Snuffles.
I loved this story. The pacing was amazing. Just right.
Great job!!
person MagicalWinry
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the wonderful story!
person ilke
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And somewhere in that moment, Harry found himself.

It was perfect. A perfect story of love and healing. Every chapter I read felt like being wrapped in a protective blanket of warmth. Thanks.
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am soooo going to miss this!
person avihenda
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, but there one thing that bothered me with the last chapter... it's small, but it did bugg me. You don't usually have porches in england and if you do, they are not commonly big enough to have a swing seat (actually, they usually don't have swing seats, not that I've seen anyway). You can more commonly find varandahs and patios. As I said, it's just a small hang up I had with an otherwise great fic.
Thanks for a great read!