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for Undesirable - COMPLETE

by slashpervert

person qwerty
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No wonder Harry's so messed up. And that was only the beginning of his torture. Ugh. I feel so much for him.
Great chapter and you have a great writing style.
update!
person MeLaiya
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so loving this. Please update soon and keep up the good work.
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God im addicted to this story! Whenevr I get to the bottom Im like NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Thanks for updating!
person Toddy
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another two chapters - great!!!!!!!!!!!

You have the right way of telling about withdrawn characters and how hard it is for a healer to reach them. I look forward to seeing Draco succeed.

Keep up the good work.
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this! i can't wait to see where it is going!!
person arealdeal
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great start, as usual. this looks to be a good one, will watch for more.
person Caldonya
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really interesting story. I was wondering if you were going to put more flashbacks in or leave it vague with just glimpses. Keep going, I find it hard to wait.
person qwerty
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man, I can tell that this story is going to be good.
You have a great writing style.
update!!
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Every chapter gets more and more interesting. Please update again soon.
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is really good! Definitely a story I'm going to be following. Can't wait for the next chapter!

The other thing is, this seems really familiar to a story a friend of mine is writing over on fanfiction.net - bflatgirl is the penname. But it's really different in content, just the whole, Draco taking care of Harry style thing is similar. They're both really original so don't worry.

So yeah, great work!
~gorgeousbowneyes