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for Undesirable - COMPLETE

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person avihenda
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you've set a nice pace for this fic. Looking forward to seening where it's going.
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Everytime you update I always end up angry! GRRRR! Im sooo glad Voldemort is dead! Poor Harry...Thanks for updating! Haha!
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it !!!!!!!!!!!
person Graballz
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, a new story from you!!! *happy dance* I really, really like this so far!! It's great! So far, my favorite scene was when Harry climbed on top of Draco in bed that first night...I love those "awwww" moments that aren't exactly orthodox! (Hope there are more of those!) Great job! I appreciate the flashbacks and Lucius and Voldy need to DIE!!! (Well, by now, they're already dead and I'm glad, but still...)
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry! Sooo need chapter 7!!
person Milva
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more :D
person Sjerda
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story, really, but why does it take you so long to update? (I know, it could be worse, but it's so hard to wait till you give me the next chapter!)
If you know, how many chapters there are for this story, then you have already written them, right?
Please, just a little bit faster!
I love your story, it's a really interesting plot.
Bye
Sjerda

PS: My mother tongue is german...just...sorry for all the mistakes I made in this comment^^
person Leentjef
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very very good chapter keep going and post
soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Such great storytelling! I'm glad Harry is becoming more aware.
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 6!!!