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for Undesirable - COMPLETE

by slashpervert

schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Harry. Its so sad just how much they broke him. Draco feels horrible as well because he is attracted to him but he cant cross that line. I think its all very gentlemanly of him. ^.^ Thanks for updating!
person Rururr
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I truly love this! Great story! ^^
person alle
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Written as lovely as ever, as usual!
Things do seem to be going along a little slower, but thats probably expected in this type of story.
The chapters do seem shorter as well, but you do post more than once every three weeks, so I'm not complaining! I appreciate it, and look forward to every one =).
person redheadwizard
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg this story is sooooooooo amazing!!!!! but its sad b/c you dont update enough and the chapters are short and leave me wanting more nad more and more!
person fudgebaby
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am LOVING this story!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't decide where you are going with this. I will keep reading to see!
person qwerty
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's a kind of painful agony reading what was done to Harry.... all those conflicting emotions...
Great writing!
update!
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter because it showed just how far gone Harry is and how much help he needs. Thanks for updating!
person Milva
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7: too short and almost about nothing... Hope 8 will be better :D
person Leentjef
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mmm good chapter
keep up the good work and post soon
bye bye