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for Undesirable - COMPLETE

by slashpervert

person Milva
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this story.
person Leentjef
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
VERY VERY GOOD CHAPTER
I REALLY LIKED IT
KEEP UP THE GRAET WORK
BYE BYE
person Belhana
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more? please more? pleeeeeeeease???
person qwerty
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry! But at least he's making some strides!
Great chapter.
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schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was starting to write a big long review but I realized there is no point. I can sum it all up in one sentence:

I love everything about this story!
person Leentjef
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very very very good keep up the good work
person Toddy
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great One!!!!!

I like the slow healing idea and you tell it so well.
person Milva
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Harry... How could they did it to him, bastards... But Draco will help him ^^ Can't wait for next chappie!
person qwerty
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I really like the pace that everything's going... it's not rushed.
update!
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry. I'm really glad Draco is there for him. This is really great!