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for Undesirable - COMPLETE

by slashpervert

person ilke
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! Yet again!
person Leentjef
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was very good chpater keep going andpost soon
bye bye
person gentlenightrain
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's so short! But I always look foward to this story's updates...
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Im glad that Ginny and Ron took it as well as they did. I cant wait for more! Thanks for updating!
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So good!! I love it!!
person qwerty
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ginny better not suddenly want Harry now that he's showing some signs of progress... poor Harry would probably jump at the chance of being loved by her, which would leave Draco out in the dust.
Great chapter!
update!
person Caldonya
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet ending. I was wondering when someone else was going to show up. I really look forward to every chapter when it comes out.
person Rosei
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12

Poor, desirable Harry!!!!! Stupid Weasleys!!!! Sexy and helpful Draco!!!!!
Stupid Weasleys!!!!!! HA!

Thanks,
R

person redheadwizard
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg pure torture! why cant the chapters be longer???
you are torturing us i swear it! but still sooooooo fabulous
person Milva
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ron, how shock it must was to him, saw Draco taking care of Harry xD And Harry i Draco are getting closer with each day, I can't wait for the first kiss :D More, please ^^