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person Silverkitten
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is probably my new favorite story. I actually cried at a few parts, it got really intense. it is written beautifully, and it only intensified my desire to bring voldie back from the dead so I could kill him myself. and now my inner fangirl is going to take over and say.... OMG, THAT ENDING WAS SO CUTE!!!!!! lol

xoxo
Silverkitten
person The Queen Anne
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I started with one of your shorter novel length fics. Oh my god this was great! So sensitive and loving and scary and angsty and sexy and just plain wonderful. I'm such a slow reader that I'm a little intimidated by your epic size fics but I will definitely give them a shot! Your writing is wonderful!
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This has been an absolute pleasure to read. Thank you and well done. xx
person Amouse
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I must admit that when I first read the summary this story did not appeal to me at all. In fact I had no intention to read it. I went to your author page though (I wanted to reread the Bound Prince series, which I LOVE and am patiently awaiting the next installment for) and realized that you had written it. Like I said, I love your other stories so I thought I'd give it a try. I loved it! It is very well written, the plot moves smoothly, the story doesn't get unnecessarily caught up in different scenarios, dragging things out (that is something that bothers me in stories. Yes, we need things for the characters to overcome but please, unless it's the main problem in the story, ie, Harry's mental issues, then please move on! This is something I think you should be commended on). Again, I really liked it a lot. Are there any plans for an epilogue of some sort, so we can see what happens with those two?
person Leentjef
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was very very good storie
i really liked it, i liked the storie line but also the way it was writen
keep writing and post
bye bye
person Anabel
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An absolutely perfect story. I have read most of your other Harry/Draco stories and this was the best ever. Not too long and beautifully paced. I will save this one to read again, many times. Thanks for the hours of enjoyment.

Annie
person Milva
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love you forever and ever.
person xanniex
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is definately one of the best stories I've ever read.
i would have adored to see their kids they have
though i guess many will have to wait til you have a sequel in mind.
but i had great time reading this. you two really are exceptional writers.
:]
person Jessica
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this. I rarely come onto AFF, but i was glad to find a wonderful story as soon as I got on here.
Thank you very much.
person ubm0584
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story. I usually don't like the ones involving rapes because I always end up crying but you wrote it in a way that made the story more real for me, more romantic (between Draco and Harry of course). I simply loved it and I thank you for the beautiful gift you both have shared with all of us.