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by slashpervert

schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it please more!!
person redheadwizard
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omggggggggggggg soooooooo adorable!!!!!!!!!! that was so cute, even for oral sex!
love it!!!!! pleease update sooner! i cant stand this mon. wed. fri. thing, it drives me insane!
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was such a sweet chapter! I am so glad Draco was so gentle and understanding.
person ilke
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So, maybe Draco can get his Sex Healer's license (eek, the song 'Sexual Healing' keeps running though my head). God damn I fucking love this story. I read soooo many stories and this is at the very top, number one spot, even above all my beloved Dramiones. Seriously rockin!
person Milva
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hot :D Now nothing can't stop them :)
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter. I just love the way Draco was so patient and caring with Harry. It was sweet...and hot. Thanks for updating!
person avihenda
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good
person JKG
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I have just recently read your Bound Prince Series and now I have found this. I love the way you write. Both stories are so very different. This one has a touch of bitterness, sadness and you have succeeded in making me shed a few tears. Oh yes...this has a happy ending right? I just cannot bear unhappy endings. I'm looking forward to the next chapter for this story and the newest story for the Bound Prince Series.
person xXVatesXx
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*ish too lazy to log in*

Wow... I'm quite impressed! I am really loving what your doing with this, and the only thing I can see wrong are a few grammar mistakes. Interesting plot and I can't wait to see what happens. please update soon! I haven't been this intrigued in a HP fic for a looooong time ^^
Cheers
Crmy
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is very sweet. I'm a little worried about how the intercourse is going to effect Harry. I hope he isn't going to go into a crazy spell. I can't wait for the next chapter ^_^