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for Undesirable - COMPLETE

by slashpervert

person Madame Feu Cheveux
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woah, well first off I feel the need to apologise, because basically I have read this for weeks, and forgotten to reveiw, and I hate it when people do that XD
However, your story is amazing, you have the right balance going. Its mature, and a little disturbing at times, and then completely heartwarming. I love it. You are an amazing writer. And please, keep updating! ^w^

oooh, also, you update so quickly, basically, I love you xD

enamoured,
Madame.
person char6785
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG i just love this story !!!!!, can't wait for hopefully harry to get a bit better, but then again i'm not the author and cant say whats gonna happen lol, keep up the great work :)
person Milva
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I became quite addicted to this story :P Every Monday, Wednesday and Friday I can't wait to 11 A.M.! (is about this time at mine when new chapter is upload)
person Leentjef
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very very very good chapter
keep going and post soon
bye bye
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I am taken with this story. It is very well written but is very disturbing. Please keep writting/.
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How gruesome was that?! I am so glad Harry is safe now. It's no small wonder his mind was messed up! I'm glad Draco understands him.
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So sad :( Hope McLaggen comes to a very very nasty end.
beautifully written, as always.
person ilke
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ewwww, that was gruesome! Love, love, loved that "it all came out" - or rather, the nuts and bolts of it, when Harry told Draco. What happened to Draco? Are we going to get to know that? I love the tenderness between them. Seems like Harry is getting better. I have to say that my fragile imagination likes it better when you end on a happy note. I had to read the last paragraph "uncarefully" and just sort of skim my eyes over it. Maybe I'm just a weakling that way. Anyway, I do adore your story. I was happy to see that there are 31 total chapters and we're only on 16. We still have so much time together! Yeah!
person Leentjef
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg the last part was horribel, i feel so sorry for them
and the first par was very nice and sweet
keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Rosei
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16

Wow!!! Yuck!!!! Poor HP!!!!!
That poor chick!!!!!!!! Yuck!!!!!!!!!

Thanks!
R