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for Undesirable - COMPLETE

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person ilke
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hurray for Harry! He did so good! Its a little nerve wracking though, having their relationship be sort of out in the open now. I still keep thinking Draco is going to get in trouble. Anyway, great job, as usual!
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWW! that is soo sweet!!! More please!!
person Anon
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
how did you manage to actually make me feel bad for voldemort?
that is a new feeling, i must say.
at least harry go to eat and bathe.
person Leentjef
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very very good chapter
keep going and post soon
bye bye
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOO! interesting twist!! more please!!!
person ilke
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! The window into a human-like Voldemort was intense. It makes me wonder if this was just before Harry escaped, or if Voldemort will take him as a lover, or what.. And I can't wait til the testifying scene, though I admit, I'm scared of Harry reverting, scared of something bad happening to Draco (which would break Harry and in turn break Draco). it's all very bittersweet, isn't it? Well, another excellent chapter. Kudos!
person Milva
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Voldemort with human feelings? Wow, that's something new.
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a powerful chapter. I don't think enjoyed is a word i would use, but i did connect with it. Keep up the good writting and update please.
person robineggs
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Voldemort LOVED? Great story but Voldemort doesn't know how to love. UPDATE!
person fallenangel1129
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
even evil can love