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for Undesirable - COMPLETE

by slashpervert

person qwerty
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWW! So cute!
Tipsy!Harry is so adorable. Hopefully he won't regret his decision in the morning...
update!
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying your story... Are they both uncircumsized?
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really sweet. Not to mention hot!
person ilke
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah for Harry trying! I guess he is officially on the mend. This whole chapter was incredibly sweet and I am not even sorry that they didn't go all the way. Draco pleasuring himself in front of Harry is HOT!
person qwerty
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw!
Loved it!
update!
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was fantastic. I just love the love radiating through both of them for eachother. Harry seems to almost be ready for Draco to make love to him, inside of him, but it feels like there should be one more hurdle to cross befor ethat happens. Keep writing, and update soon ;p
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWW!! that was sweet!!
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mm i see something going wrong soon...dun dun dun!
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man I hope McLaggen is locked away. What a horrible SOB. I am actually shaking from what happend. I get very attatched to stories and I really felt it, all the emotions. You ar a very good writter. Please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.
person qwerty
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well-written.
I'm glad that Harry is progressing so much. Will the Ministry try to know more about what happened to Harry while he was captive?
update!