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by slashpervert

person James Carter
schedule August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Your work is wonderful. Please keep writing.
person GlassSkiin
schedule June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Truly beautiful thank you for the read
person Anon
schedule January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
As always, LOVE your writing! This was an amazing story - very moving! Thanks!
person jujukitty
schedule September 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow! absolutely amazing story especially about such a difficult subject but the execution was splendid. awesome job!
person polka dot
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm not a fan of torture fics, so I skipped over the flashbacks, but I loved the happy ending.
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my god. what a great read. Have to say this intense of read just too good to be true. absolutely love the storyline and just adore the way you wrote it. beond words good. just magnificent.... love it. just love it. thank you so much for such beautiful creation. so far the best I have ever read. thank you!!
person Michelle Wolf
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you're still a bloody git and now you owe me three boxes of tissues. it was terrific, well not the Harry torture bits but you probably know what i mean. too bad you didn't put those children in the story but thats what imaginations were made for. i also like Moonlight Offering just so you know. never thought i would like that kind of thing, but that story was great if alittle odd. *shrug*
keep writing! ^_^
person Kiwiberry
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, My, God.
i can't help but have to admit that this would be one of the best DH stories ive ever seen. (Given that this is the first ENGLISH DH story ive ever read...but
the development of affection was so natural between them, and i liked the transformation of Draco from the original of him in JKR's words.
the flashbacks...were...detailed. and a bit scary.
my heart literally froze when i saw the part with voldemort and harry and how harry thinks that hes in love with him...
anyways...i actually have more after thoughts, but i gtg now...maybe ill do a second review later.
thanks for presenting such a great story :D
person kiwiberry
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh, forgot to finish the sentence.
this is my first english DH story
but ive also read about.....lets just say at least 50 DH stories in chinese
so really, yours is absolutely amazing...
hmm....maybe i should think of translating it when i have time in the summer.......
person L_perv
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i have just now found this story i have read many of your stories before and have enjoyed them all. this one is true to your style. you seem to put your all into your stories and i appreciate all your hard work and greatly enjoy all i have read so far. you bring the characters to life thank you