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for An Offer She Couldn't Refuse

by TenderQuaintWitch

person Shellnet
schedule June 18, 2019 at 12:00 AM

It was good had it not been abandoned

schedule October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Will there be more? I so believe the relationship, please continue.
person Tenar10r
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to more.
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, please don't abandon this! I like it very much and can't wait to see where you go with it!
person amsev
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice start! I'm looking forward to reading where this goes. (an offer she couldn't refuse, indeed! ~endeavoring not to drool in her keyboard~)
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmm, that's interesting.
update soon!
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great please please please soon .. later for now

angel
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more to see exactly what Dumbledore has in store for Hermione. Why does he want to keep her around and not let her do what she wants? I hope that she and Severus will eventually become a couple and then maybe he can help protect her from Dumbledore.
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated! I hope you get back into the swing of things as well. Oh, and that part with Severus? Very much with the hot. lol
person Terrie
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story. I can see lots of room for exploring different directions. Your writing style has a good mixture of dialog and conversation. Don't worry about this latest chapter as it was a good bridge chapter which gave some insight into their personalities. Tempt your muse with chocolate cake (or whatever) and I know you'll be able to get into the flow. Oh, and thank you for you work to get this written.