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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely bloody amazing! This has already gotten me tangled into the loop of interest!
So...a few questions:
1. If Severus is here, does that mean the Marauders are there as well?
2. Is Harry going to try his luck with Narcissa? (Hey Draco! I shagged your mum!)
3. Can I borrow Lucius for tonight? (Hey Draco! I shagged your dad!)
So...a few questions:
1. If Severus is here, does that mean the Marauders are there as well?
2. Is Harry going to try his luck with Narcissa? (Hey Draco! I shagged your mum!)
3. Can I borrow Lucius for tonight? (Hey Draco! I shagged your dad!)
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2: Hermione and Harry are beset on all sides, mostly orchestrated by Lucius. He
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter one
In a word I would sum up this story as BRILLIANT! It took me on a wide range of emotions from sadness at their loss of loved ones (actual tears), to cackling like a wicked witch in amusement upon reading of Hermione being puked upon by poor little Connor--too freaking funny!
8~D
Fantastic--I'm off to read the next chapter!
In a word I would sum up this story as BRILLIANT! It took me on a wide range of emotions from sadness at their loss of loved ones (actual tears), to cackling like a wicked witch in amusement upon reading of Hermione being puked upon by poor little Connor--too freaking funny!
8~D
Fantastic--I'm off to read the next chapter!
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter. Glad to see an update. Hope to see another one soon. Keep up the good work!
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter two
I LOVE, Love, love this story. I found myself cackling gleefully throughout:
1) Harry's freaking on Hermione trying to tame his cowlick.
2) Hermione saying that she thought that boys out grew the cootie stage by age of twelve.
3) Harry's comeback that one whose parent's are dentists ought to know how germy mouths can be.
4) Harry's loud sigh and comment,
I LOVE, Love, love this story. I found myself cackling gleefully throughout:
1) Harry's freaking on Hermione trying to tame his cowlick.
2) Hermione saying that she thought that boys out grew the cootie stage by age of twelve.
3) Harry's comeback that one whose parent's are dentists ought to know how germy mouths can be.
4) Harry's loud sigh and comment,
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is my new favourite story!! I cant wait for more!
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love you thiiiiiiiiiiiiiiss much too! *dives into open arms for a cuddle*
lol. Seriously, I'm starved of affection because I haven't seen my other half in... a month? A month and a half? I cant remember :(
Anyway... a timeturner-ish fic, and I think this is the first LM/HG one I've EVER seen! BRILLIANT!
I can see Hermione Mothering another first year too, a little black-haired, black-eyed boy who is in desperate need of a hug or five!
I had to laugh that Lucius wanted to sort out her mess of curls! lol! Vain prat! Though, if she's suspected as pureblood, she can make up some nonsense about her Grandmother having this hair or something.
Harry seems a bit lost, and he's going to slip up sooner or later! If Severus is a first year, this means that the maurauders are also first years. Is anyone going to draw the conclusion that Harry is (at this moment) an older replica of James Potter? Can that be explained away too? Has Dumbledore picked a family name that are related to the Potters?
Their accents can also be explained away - perhaps they had an English Governess and spent more time with her than at school? Their parents would have been Brits too - and accents don't change that much. My Great uncle moved to Canada many MANY moons ago (my Dad visited in his 20s and he's 57 now - and they moved before that)- and uncle Bill STILL has his broad Yorkshire accent!
Their uniforms could perhaps be explained as wishful thinking of their governess without their parents' permission? Perhaps the Governess read Hogwarts: A History and put ties on them where she saw best? But why were the time travelers wearing their school uniform on Christmas Eve? That doesn't make much sense.
I'm highly intrigued as to how you're going to get them together; but my guess is that Lucius finds the passion in her that he doesn't have with Narcissa. And with Hermione being a 'pureblood', he would be able to have a relationship with her.
lol. Seriously, I'm starved of affection because I haven't seen my other half in... a month? A month and a half? I cant remember :(
Anyway... a timeturner-ish fic, and I think this is the first LM/HG one I've EVER seen! BRILLIANT!
I can see Hermione Mothering another first year too, a little black-haired, black-eyed boy who is in desperate need of a hug or five!
I had to laugh that Lucius wanted to sort out her mess of curls! lol! Vain prat! Though, if she's suspected as pureblood, she can make up some nonsense about her Grandmother having this hair or something.
Harry seems a bit lost, and he's going to slip up sooner or later! If Severus is a first year, this means that the maurauders are also first years. Is anyone going to draw the conclusion that Harry is (at this moment) an older replica of James Potter? Can that be explained away too? Has Dumbledore picked a family name that are related to the Potters?
Their accents can also be explained away - perhaps they had an English Governess and spent more time with her than at school? Their parents would have been Brits too - and accents don't change that much. My Great uncle moved to Canada many MANY moons ago (my Dad visited in his 20s and he's 57 now - and they moved before that)- and uncle Bill STILL has his broad Yorkshire accent!
Their uniforms could perhaps be explained as wishful thinking of their governess without their parents' permission? Perhaps the Governess read Hogwarts: A History and put ties on them where she saw best? But why were the time travelers wearing their school uniform on Christmas Eve? That doesn't make much sense.
I'm highly intrigued as to how you're going to get them together; but my guess is that Lucius finds the passion in her that he doesn't have with Narcissa. And with Hermione being a 'pureblood', he would be able to have a relationship with her.
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
COOL!!! THis story seems to be a good start. Aww....everybody dying...ah well, I never liked Ron that much anyway... Keep this story up, I see great potential!
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Conner....lol.....aww, I mean, poor kid.
Great start!
Great start!
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1: Whew! What a whirlwind beginning. This is very exciting and so beautifully written. The fear and sadness, the urgency and kindly irritation with the small boy - everything draws one into the horror of the moment. I liked how they found and used their spell and the inclusion of the little Slytherin - I wonder how he will fit into the story? And the surprise at the end of their spell. Fascinating. I am so hoping you will complete this story because I really want to read the entire tale.