rate_review Reviews

how i luv stories about protective malfoys and when they have veela in them the story gets 2 points lol....great story so far, the order of the black thorn sounds vaguely familiar to me anyway, this story is good so far....extra kudos to u for the detailed descriptions of the marks of the veela...i cant wait to see what you have planned...maybe a little assassin training hmmm?!

yay!! i love veela stories they're the best!! ^_^. I can't wait for an update!! ^_^

Oh, I hope they find out about her parents soon!!! And you take way to long to update ;) I know I've read this here and there over quite some months...and we're only on chapter 5?!! Please update soon! Love this story.

Oh, I hope they find out about her parents soon!!! And you take way to long to update ;) I know I've read this here and there over quite some months...and we're only on chapter 5?!! Please update soon! Love this story.

I like this story so far, but I'm a little confused about how careing and normal you made the Grangers seem in chapter four, but in chapter three they locked Hermione out of the house in a foreign country when she was only six. That would have been years before the Black Thorn kidnapped them so it doesn't make sence that they would be so mean back then but proud of her before they get taken.

Ah ha great, could never really find a good Veela story.

I really like your story! There just aren't enough veela stories, if you ask me! Keep up the good work and update soon, please!!! Thanks!

I love Draco as Veela and Hermione as his mate stories. In my opinion there aren't enough. Love your story so far. Please update soon.

Tale

I'm loving what you are doing with this story. Emotions run high and its so realistic. More background on Hermione's home life please.
And I was having trouble reading the dialogue because there are no quotes... but like signs?

Veela!Draco is my favorite DM/HG! And I love that he has always had a secret crush on her before the Veela manifested... that way he doesn't have to be convinced. And is Hermione still a virgin? Because in Veela Fics she usually has to be but I wonder has she ever been molested?

Anywho, I can't wait for more. It seems really thought-out and I do love a planned fic! Kudos.

I think that your story is wonderful. However I am becoming increasingly annoyed with having to read symbols instead of quotation marks. I hope that you can correct this issue. Keep up the good work and update soon.

BabeCake