rate_review Reviews

This was frightening, so very terrifying. I Didn't like the plot one bit - but I had to keep reading to the end. It really unsettled me, but I can't deny that it was a well written piece.

This was an interesting story, even if it was a oneshot. I don't condone child abuse in anyway but I think that this would have been even more interesting if you would have continued with it. Lucius could have decided to pursue her during the rest of her time at Hogwarts and then take possession of her after graduation. However it was still a well written story.