rate_review Reviews

Excellent characterization. I've always imagined Lucius to be this way; this is the first time I've read a fanfic that convincingly portrays him as such. Other than that, you've taken a very difficult subject and managed to keep pornography out of it--graphic, but harrowing.

OOh I am all to comfort Herms :( poor little girl

Loved it. It felt very real and yet not so coarse that I had to stop reading. I'd love to see a piece by you in which Lucius manages to coerce Hermione into enjoying... (how do I put this?!) some bedroom-time together. Not that it would need to be in a bedroom :)

Oh that was terrible! Not the writing mind you, the situation. I read the warnings and still read anyway.
Well done, poor Hermione.

Please, please write a companion piece about Draco.

The best new fic I've read in a long time! Both of them were perfectly in character and the whole set-up was just very believable- well done!

This is the detached, utterly soulless Lucius Malfoy that some interpret him to be. Calm, calculating, and unflinchingly cruel. It's not easy to write something like this, or to read it, but I can see the merit in your characterization and your description of a despicable event through the eyes of the aggressor. People like this do exist in the world and this is a queasy reminder of that.

Oddly erotic at times, despite the topic. I'm glad Hermione didn't enjoy it at all though in some attempt to justify Lucius's act. It's very interesting to see things from Lucius's point of view, to understand how he can derive enjoyment from doing such things. You did a good job with Hermione's reactions, how she would have been thinking, her locking herself in the bathroom.

One thing is that Hermione wouldn't be wearing her school clothes if they're in Diagon Alley, because then it's probably the summertime (or winter break, I suppose).

Just be careful where you post this, some sites don't allow sex involving minors or sex between minors and adults) to be posted--I don't know if they respond by just pulling the story, or pulling down entire accounts.

wow...this was....i mean...wow

I'm not a fan of this type of thing, normaly, but I think this was good and reallistic(?).

Just so every one don't think I'm some sick person, I have been abused myself when I was 4-5 yrs old.