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for Lucius the Conqueror

by ChristaMcGinn

schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was cool. I like the discription of Draco's change. My, he is emotional. Who would have thought? But is Lucius really the bad ass, or will he change. I know, he must be, but still I have this thing with atempting to change men. Should I mention, that doing so I always fail miserably in real life? I'm curious of what comes next. Is Moine being tamed by Draco? Or is Lucius gonna be tamed by Moine? Or are you surprising us with something completly different? Can't wait for the update. And what would have Ginny done in that situation? I rather think she would have done the same. Cause what do you wanna do, when you are kidnapped, raped and forced to marry someone you always hated?
Hope to read more soon. LOL, Alex
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful! Also, on the note of flamers, you'll often see that those who flame have no stories posted themselves, probably because they haven't the courage to write or they haven't the talent. Pay them no heed.
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it. And Hermione is right....Draco is the lesser of two evils. Can't wait for more!!
person Larrabee
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is this a Draco & Hermione fic? Or a Lucius & Hermione fic?
person cassie
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it. please let lucius be jealous
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I am glad that Draco told Hermione about his feelings for her and how he has wanted her for years. I think that she will give him a chance but will still worry that Lucius might try to have his way with her again. I hope that Draco will protect her as much as possible. I would like to see her marry Draco, but I think it would be very interesting if Lucius would continue to have his way with her and end up getting her pregnant. I look forward to reading more soon.
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start. I look forward to reading more.