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for Lucius the Conqueror

by ChristaMcGinn

person Kill Bill
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear lord,Lucius can make any girl make her hot for him.
Please update as soon as possible, I want to know what
he is going to do with Hermione, now that he wants her
to be his (very possessive, I like it).
person CoCoM
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really interesting and I am looking forward to see if it does indeed ultimately end as a HG/LM or a HG/DM fic. I suppose I should feel guilty about the fact that even though Lucius is a sick bastard he is still unbelievably sexy. *sigh* I guess there is no hope for me!
person CoCoM
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh...yeah..*gulp* Again, I should feel naughty, I am sure, but that was pretty darn hot. How I love that man!
person morganabythesea
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far and am looking forward to more! :-) The only suggestion I have are the margins, could be my computer for all I know, but I have to scroll right and left to read each line. Since I have no idea what you have to do to post stories I could be totally off! :-)

Thanks again for the story!
person Anon
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person kitty08
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
um wow a very good chapter. but i cant really understand why Hermione has to be such a bitch to Draco. I know he killed Ron, but everybody deserves a second chance... even him.
person vicxn
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loving it so far, cant wait for the next chapter. xx
person kitty08
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow i like your story. keep up and update soon.
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey you! nice story. i like it...
is it a hermione draco story? if so, it would be better if it's placed in the hermione/draco section... but as long as i find it again for the next chapter...
person Lelir
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, but I would suggest more character details than sex; I know you posted on Adultfanfiction, but I can also see potential for a very good plot here.
Keep the good job and don't let us hang too long ;)