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for Whispers

by SilverEyedPhoenix

schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is excellent and I'm only on the first chapter!!!!
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay for you second chapter!! ^.^ Keep it up, maybe one day I'll update too XP
person miakitty
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow,,this is amazing. You should write longer,and i think i know what will happend in R.O.R,but i'll keep it in my head,and wait for the next chapter.
person luvhp
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh, you little tease! For your first story you are doing quite well. :)
The confusion seems very believable :) Blaise is too cute.
Keep it up, I'll be here to review :)
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well Congratulations on your first fic. Isn't it the most nerve wracking thing in the world? I know when I wrote mine I was checking my e-mail over and over again, about every five minutes to see if I had reviews. hehe.


I just want to say I like where this is going, it was a bit of a shaky start. You might want to look into getting a Beta. I know I'm glad I've found one. My spelling and grammar is atrocious.
It's just a suggestion though.

Also I'm a little confused. Why did Draco call Hermione a mudblood and then seconds later offer her his hand? Was it in front of people? Because that would be really OOC of him.

So I think you should continue. I want to know why he wants to use his camera in the room of requirement ;)
person amyfeddy
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, this has much promise, I like it so far. Keep going, make the next chapter longer if you can. I know this was a setup, but I would like to read more.
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*shakes head* what have I done to you XP
*glomps* its was good! XP
person Camryn31
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woow i like the stoy... soo cute
it needs a spelling check (Harry not harry)
and its a bit weird that Draco Malfoy knows what a camera is....but oh well
other than that its reaaally good!!!!! i like the storyline
update SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!
person luvhp
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bring it on, sounds fun!
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice start, I would love to see more, however, I saw a few mistakes, such as proper names not capitalized (harry instead of Harry, to instead of too, etc.) Other than that, I liked that Hermione was nervous around Draco, but he returned her....feelings?

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