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by SilverEyedPhoenix

person luvhp
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As I said before, what and Ron and Pansy up to??? Hmmm, can't wait to see!
Good job girl...
person Anon
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
laughs with evil glee - I can't wait to see what Ron and Pansy come up with and better yet, Hermione and Draco's reactions.

Is it wrong of me to want to snog all night rather than do homework and all that responsible stuff? LOL
person luvhp
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I like this story, I really do, so much in fact that I'd be honored to BETA it for you....if you'd like. I am crazy anal about spelling errors (Obviously not in my own work, lol) twelshans@hotmail.com
also, could I ask a small , itty-bitty favor....???
Please use Blaise's correct name (I'm smiling, I am) It's:

Zabini, Blaise (b. circa 1980)
Slytherin 1991-1998 (PS7).
Described as a "tall black boy with high cheekbones and long, slanting eyes." Blaise shares Draco's prejudice against Muggle-born witches and wizards; Ginny considers Blaise a "poser."
Lexicon

When I see authors use: Zambini, I think of the ice cleaner in hockey, okay, peace out.
person Anon
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, Ron and Pansy collaborating. Not sure what's going to come of this but of course I want to find out. :)
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I dont think there reactions are too extreme, yet. We'll see if you start lighting people on fire or something crazy in the next chapters lol.
And I lol when you were like, 'how hufflepuff of you'. Dork XP
person Camryn31
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehehe nice one
i love stupid arsehole rons *g*
are hermione and draco boyfriend/girlsfriend or not yet?! not exactly sure...
anyway.. i love stories where their relationshp is out in the open.. so .. yeah..
updaaaaate soon!!!!
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwss, yay for first kisses! ^.^
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol, I love how you know all the little facts XP
Another uber awesome special chapter!
Yay!
^.^
person Anon
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Hermione couldn't help but squeak like a preteen girl at a a boy band concert." LMAO - Loved that line. :) And Hermione being 'his' Gryffindor Princess to boot.

Don't stress over any mistakes, we all make them. (please, I've lost count of mine) LOL Frankly as long as I can understand where the sentence is going I don't give a toss whether a word is mispelt or there's been a typo or the punctuation is off. Just get in there and have some fun writing and I'll have fun reading. :)
person Fairycat
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm this story is getting hot. Can't wait for the next chapter!

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