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by soldiersgirl0709

person mageemi
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I am loving this story, please keep adding more. They are so good together and you write them sooo well! Sounds like Ginny would like to join in the fun too. (I usually am not a big fan of Ginny but I like her here, she is very supportive and protective of Hermione.)
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, awesome update! please add more soon.
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yayy! I'm so happy you're adding more to this. I love it! Hermione is a lucky, lucky woman. I'd be Lucius' pleasure pet anytime, anywhere.
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ay Mami, that was HOT!! Love it love it love it! And I can't wait for more!!
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was excellent. I can't wait to read more soon.
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GREAT!!!! Thank you for continuing the story. And if you ask me, storylines are overrated. To just write what comes to your mind, keeps us entertained and the story fresh. Can't wait for the update! LOL, Alex
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you decided to continuous this--the previous chapter ended in such a tantalizing manner. I'd love to see a snippet where Draco comes home and is confused to discover Hermione wandering around. I think it'd take a while for Lucius and Hermione to get to that point though. Lucius's agressiveness is almost at the non-con point though; I think Hermione would eventually formulate a response and strike back.
Very hot sex scene--love the cane. And all those kisses and nibbling.
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!!! I wish Lucius would came pay me a visit at work!! Him and his wand(s)!!

schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL this was brilliant! Office sex is the ultimate fantasy!! Hope for more of this great gem!
person Tenar10r
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*squee!*