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by soldiersgirl0709

person Damiana
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
These little PWPs are thoroughly exciting!

You rock!
person cerichan
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This fic is absolutely not a good fic to be read...at work!

I'm all flushed and just had a nice dark_samira time....*sigh* and I DO NOT WORK ALONE...
(These are the times in which I enjoy *cough* being a woman the most, you don't need to use hands^^)

Not that you need suggestions about what you write, it's hot enough as it is, but if this can influence you somehow for the next chapter...I'd like to see some nice sub!Hermione dom!Lucius play. One of the thinks that I like most in the story is the way Lucius is both dominating and loving (MY ideal of a man), so I'm not suggesting him to become a bastard in general, just a little play. I'd like just a scene of him a bit more dominating too. And if hermione could give him head in that scene, not as a preliminar, but a "complete head"....*double sigh*
(Just to explain myself better this is the scene I have in mind: Hermione on her knees giving head to Lucius, who's all "masterish")

But if this doesn't appeal to you it's ok, I'm sure Ill be happy with whatever you come up with....
bye

(and thanks for the dark_samira time ;P)
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness. That was so hot!! And was that Ginny?!
person mariteri
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was great.
person mlui
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wonder who that is? I would say Ginny but doesn't she have blue eyes? Great chapter and please update again soon!
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, how did it not occur to me that it was Ginny watching Dean and Seamus? Well I'm glad Ginny finally got her wish to watch! Very well-written, and I can't wait for more chapters.
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing, hot and sensual. Voyeurism is certainly a turn on for our Hermione. Wish i had a Lucius of my own to play with!!!

Fantastic writing, and as always, breathless for more!!!

Love, Lady B
xoxoxo
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear god! That was so HOT! You my dear friend, are the Queen of smut! Handsdown, this was the best chapter so far, in my opinion. Was that Ginny? I'm so jealous!

Hugs!

V x
person carha
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL you found a way to get Ginny to watch them. That was a great chapter. I was happy to see updates on 2 of your stories today. Great job hun, keep em comin when you can
person Utopia
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
do I spy a teeny-weeny little bit of my influence in here? lol!

How's you, honey? I know something that will cheer you up - and if I can get my net to work right it will be up tomorrow!

*hugs*