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by soldiersgirl0709

person Jesse
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on the win!! That was a great chapter! Poor Lucius, but good for Hermione for getting him like that! :) Can't wait for Merlin's Tomb!!
person Janeplay
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so loving this story! Shy, reserved Hermione coming out of her shell and lovely, loving Lucius! Awesome and such a contrast to aggressive Hermione in your other stories. Cool!
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't beleive you ended it like that! I can't wait til the next chappie to see what Lucius's reaction to Hermione's decleration of love is!

Fantastic chappie lovie! Big Hugs!
person Pumkin
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update. congrats on the win. i can't wait for your next one. i love all of ur stories. keep up the good work.
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far! Ahhh! Finally, a different version of Lucius who isn't torturing Hermione or something like that... Mmmm...
Bu really, I wanted to let you know that I have mentioned your story in my blog "Loves Dramione." I put your screenname, and the name of the story. The url is http://lovesdramione.blogspot.com
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so enjoying these little forays of smut! I love the way you have written Ginny in this story. Hermione seems to be in for the ride of her life (both literally and figuratively!) and I am enjoying every minute of it. I am going to check out your other stories right now.
person Anon
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm with Ginny, I'm as jealous as sin but hey, at least she finally got to watch Lucius in action. LOL

I think I'm in need of a cold shower myself. That was very hot. :)
person kimmysue
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have thoroughly enjoyed the little scenerios in this story and talk about some hot and steamy sex scenes...I am fanning myself here! I cannot wait for the next installment and will check back frequently to see if you have updated. I love that you show Lucius as a tender lover because that is something I need in stories, not just the raw sex. Chapter 5 meant a lot to me and i really appreciate a glimpse in Lucius' heart and mind. I adore Lumione fic as well as Dramione when it is well written and intense like this story is. Thank you!!

Kimmy
person monica
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story. dirty, romantic, hot...I can't wait for more!
person Gertie
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As always, this story is fantastic. I love Ginny in this. The relationship between her and Hermoine is perfect. You should write a Ginny fic sometime. (like you aren't busy enough) I loved the explaination for Lucius's need to be needed. It's funny to think of him as a boyfriend. But I'd love to be the recipient of a LM choker...naughty thoughts.