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by soldiersgirl0709

schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More please....i really like this one!
person salazarslytherin14
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you really have to update more often.
i love this story
person Kira
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow i love this story it's sooo hot please make a new chapter asap
person michelle
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh maaaaaaan. that was awesome!i actually liked the development of their relationship more. *insert dreamy sigh* i wish i was hermione.

P.S.: do you have a mailing list for this story? if so, please include me!i LOVE this story and HAVE to read more!
person Savaial
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy rap this was a hot story. Non-stop action, well written and utterly captivating. You pegged Lucius. Hermione was completely believable. Ginny made me laugh, wicked thing. Splendid tale and crafted so well! Thank you for sharing it!
person Ithilwen
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was a wonderfully lovely and hot story!!!
I sat with a grin plastered on my face for most of the time! And laughed out loud at things.. If someone overheard me, they will think me crazy.! hehe.

I can't wait for more!!
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations! Of course you won! It was an easy vote, it's a great story and you write my beloved Lucius so well, you deserved it!
This was a very hot chapter! " He was so relaxed as he sat back against the wooden surface, his legs slightly apart, his robes shoved behind him, one hand rested on the serpent ornament on his cane and the other was beckoning her closer with a crooked finger." Merlin's left ball!! That's hot!
person CoCoM
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! That was probably the steamiest chapter thus far (and that is saying something!). So, I am obviously guessing that it was Ginny watching them at the club. Are you planning on doing anything else with her in the future? (I have a major soft spot for her and particularly in your fic, she is awesome) Please keep updating!
person CoCoM
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The image of Lucius lounging against Hermione's desk holding his sexy cane was so hot. *gulp* And EVEN more hot was the scene in her office that followed. *fans self* Yeah, you are like the Queen of Gorgeous Lucius Smut. We bow down to you. ;-P
person Utopia
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Helooooooo sweetie!

If I knew what the Literature award-y ness was, I'd have voted for you! lol.

I loved that last chapter! It was EXCELLENT! Not a single complaint (though there was one wont that should have been won't - but that's easily ignored! lol!)

Can I make a request?? (I'm good at those!) Can we have it being someone's birthday or an occasion; and Lucius taking Hermione shopping for kinky knickers and pretty sexy outfits? And her being his personal little fashion model in the boutique?

xoxoxoxoxo