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by soldiersgirl0709

schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, when ever anything ends in "nothing will ruin their happiness", I know we are in trouble! :-) Loving the story, not too much angst please. This is such a wonderful love story with all the lemons we all look forward to, thanks so much for sharing.
person Utopia
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're having an updating frenzy! lol!

When we're mad, we tend to forget that our significant other can't actually read minds - or actually know what has got up our noses! lol! Poor Lucius, Hermione mad isn't pretty.

Lucius, shut up. He's digging himself one heck of a hole!

THIS IS HILLARIOUS! ROFLMAO

Domesticated and Lucius in the same sentence gives me an image of Hermione coming home to find him slaving over a few saucepans in nothing but a frilly apron! lol! Actually... that's a VERY nice image!

Ruined it? Nah, buttons sew back on, Lucius.

Whoa! Blimey! I think you have the award for best love-making scene in the DM/HG - and I think you've just got best explosive scene too! Blimey! You're on a roll at the moment, aren't you?!

Awww, cuddles after too! I love how you can go from frenzy to cute in the blink of an eye and have it flow together completely!

They're moving in! Yay!

Oooh... another Sevvie fic! Yummy.
person KellyJCR
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Reading this makes my computer smoke its so hot! I like that Lucius is more approachable in this and Hermione is not as standoffish. Inexperienced yes but, I like that she goes after what she wants. Well done!!!
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
***SIGH*** I love angry sex!!! LMAO....Hot HOT HOT!!!

Wonderfully smutty!!! I also loved that they are so enmeshed inthe routine of being together that they can fight but still do the little things for each other, like lucius lowering the zipper on her dress...brilliant!!!

Love and hugs..

LadyB

xoxoxox
person Mia
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I loved it. Very enjoyable. I feel all tingly and light after reading this. Thank you.

~Mia
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uhhhh... I LOVE this story and I have been waiting for an update on this for so long! Thank you!!!

Obviously Lucius would get completely turned on from the idea that Hermione is jeallous! Isn't it always like that with men? As long as they aren't in love they are turned off by it and when they are it turns all the way round (well okay, as long as the girl is not an posessive and exaggerating bitch).

Thank you for not abandoning this story - even if I would wish for a bit more of that delicious and slightly kinky smut of the earlier chapters in the next update!
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
person LadySaphire
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was missing this story glad to see it back!!!!
person nonentity
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter. I think leaving out girl talk in this chapter was a good call on your part--you managed to keep it up for seven chapters, but it can be awkward to incorporate. Lucius's reaction to the quilt bedspread and to the temperature of Hermione's place rings true. You emphasize Lucius's Slytherinness nicely. She would probably be too skittish about a marriage proposal (and it's not clear if he's ready for that, except as a means of keeping her). I do wonder how he plans to continue breaking her down. An "accidental" pregnancy in the future?

Love the Draco! Looking forward to seeing him in future chapters.
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, I most certainly did enjoy. Damn, that fuckfight was hot! I love it when Hermione gives as good as she gets.