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by soldiersgirl0709

person Anon
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is so awesome! Like you said, it's very.. relaxing. I like the first chapter in perticular. I think I giggled myself half to death reading it. And seriously, you write the interaction between Lucius and Hermione so well. Sometimes, I can almost feel Lucius breathing down my neck.
person sortbab
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!! that was just fantastic. trust me my bf thanks you for it. well done please let me know if you add any more to this story as the writing in this story was brilliant
person zareenyn
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know you've indicated before that Snape really does it for you, but my word, you really have a way with Luscious Lucius. He is the perfect Alpha male that so many of us women fantasise about. Thanks for letting us peek into your vision of him. Another thing I appreciate that you've not done here is that you don't have him constantly referring to Hermione as Little One. I hate to say it, but that gets rather grating after a while.

This fic is so much fun. Please keep going with it.
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sorry Ive been gone so long, computer trouble. LOVED IT THOUGH
person Anon
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I READ YOU STORY AND LET ME TELL YOU WOOOOOOOOOOOW! I'M COMPLETELY IN LOVE WITH YOUR WRITING. I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT. I LOVE THIS STORY. I LOVE HOW YOU HAVE PORTRATITED LUCIUS SO FAR AND HOW HERMIONE IS ACTING. I JUST LOVE YOUR STORY AND YOUR CREATIVE WRITING. YOU MAKE HERMIONE AND LUCIUS SOUND SO ALIKE- SO HOW THEY ARE! GREAT JOB! AWESOME! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER. YOU MADE MY DAY. UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOON!

LADY SERPENTINA
person LVanna
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Some of the BEST Lumione smut I've read in recently. So good I had to go rec' it on The_New_Library over on LJ. If you want to get the 'I was rec'd' icon just email me and I'll give you the link to the comm. Well done and keep it going! :P
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Someone recced this over at The New Library on LiveJournal so here I am, and quite happy about it too! I love Lucius, and this is fun PWP to be sure! You're doing a delicious job, to be sure.
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7: It feels like being around Lucius has finally worn through into Hermione
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!!
Some much for a series of one shots. I thing you have effectivly given plot!!
Hope you and the kids are well!!

Much love!
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more.