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by soldiersgirl0709

schedule February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to seeing this updated.

I also want to add, that I am a serious fan of your stories. Your take on these characters that Ms Rowling created for the masses is nothing short of extraordinary! You take it the next step further after DH. How it is actually possible for Houses to mesh after the war. I also thought that Hermione would have been more suited with a pureblood like a Malfoy and even Professor Snape. Also your depicting of the characters are so multi-faceted and rich that it makes me even more eager to devour each and every one of your chapters to your exquisite tales. Plus your sense of humor is totally spot on! Looking forward to reading any of your newer stories or even revisiting your completed ones. Just whatever you so, please don't stop writing. Your wit and creativity is why I enjoy reading again.
schedule November 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful fic, seriously hot and sexy. You managed to make Lucius believable even while being 'sweet' :)
schedule October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this! You know, you say this is throw away to relax you, but I have to tell you that this is entertaining and interesting. I've gotten involved in finding out "what happens next?" and hope you continue it. Is there anyway on this site that you can notify people or a link you can click that will let me know when you update? I realy hate to wait or miss if you do......
person sarahdaye9
schedule September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I just about peed myself laughing over Lucius yelling about sex life as they walked into the party. I imagined Severus with a gleeful smile on his face wanting to giggle like a little boy when he yelled surprise!
person Anon
schedule June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes, and more yes!!!! Such an amazing fic, you have made me one happy camper. I'm really not into any pairing besides Dr/H, but this story has got me hooked! Also, I find that Snape/H is kind of revolting (cause I always think of Alan Rickman's greasiness) but your Snape didn't scare me off like I thought it would! The only problem now is that I want a Luscious, I mean, Lucius of my own :( I'm really looking forward to an update, I can't wait! :D
person Lizski
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes!!! You so totally remind me why I LOVE writing Lucius smut! Thankyouthankyouthank!!!! *happy sigh* (Except that I'm now quite bummed that my smut with Lucius doesn't start for a couple more chapters... I'll have to live vicariously through you!)
person Lizski
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, review #2. :-) I LOVE this! I really like how you keep continuing the theme of Lucius (and Draco and Severus) listening to things that he shouldn't - it definitely seems to get him into, ah, sticky situations! Most excellent smut!
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 10 very hot & steamy....! Will they invite Snape over?
person rainie
schedule April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I laughed so hard on this chapter. I loved it. When they are listening in on the hen night I laughed out loud many times. I do enjoy this story so much. Thank you and happy writing.
schedule April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ha ha ha ha ha! LOVE THIS CHAPTER!! I coudln't stop laughing at the snarky conversation between Snape and the two Malfoys. Wonderful, a bit of sweetness mixed in with some naughtiness. An uplifting addition to the story!!

Love and Hugs
Lady B*