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by soldiersgirl0709

person scarlet quill
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well you certainly havent lost my readership! I remain loyal, I must admit id thought this fic had been adbandoned for wilder persuits! I'm glad to see it hasnt been forgotten! Definately an idea with the LMSSHG to be investigated, please give it a shot! I cant help wondering what Severus' take on this whole relationship would be lol. Looking forward to your next update, hope it wont be to long! :D
person mageemi
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was HOT, HOT, HOT!!!! Please don't stop here, HG/SS/LM are my fave threesome and you are one of my fave writers so what a wonderful combination. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Walls
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I dont think you went to far with the Snape fantacy. The whole story is about Hermione finding her sexuality and Lucius helping her. I think another senario would be another woman ----- Hermione and Lucious go out for dinner one nite with busisness associates and the wife subtly hits on Hermione -- just enough to get her intrested ---- and well your the writer
person Carol
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The scene between Snape, Lucius and Hermione was HOTTTTT!!!!!!
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was really good, a slant from where you normally, go, and i'm not that into slash, but i think it was tastefully done. one of the lines reminds me of a fave triad between lm/ss/hg called... death eater double team. it's on this website somewhere. glad to see you pick this one up again. brilliant as always.
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Guh! Gurgle! Blinking slowly and gasping for air here. I would love to say something eloquent, but my brain has melted out my ears. I
person Anon
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If you were to create a triad relationship, Severus and Lucius do not necessarily have to interact (sexually) with each other outside of Hermione, which relieves your slash fear. I have seen triad relationships in fics and they have worked out fine. I am in full faith that, based on your quality of writing, that you would be able to effectively write a triad between the three (that would be really hot ^^). (In Adventurous Hearts Part 2: Nimue's Island, you hinted to things very well).

Hope this review helped! Keep up the good work.
person Pumkin
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i think it turned out well. no need to worry. i can understand how you managed not to get any work done. update soon please.
person kittycat30
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lose your readers??? NEVER!!! I'm still reeling here... I thought it was a fabulous chapter, in case you couldn't tell!
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was hot. I think it would be a great chapter if you did HG/LM/SS.