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by soldiersgirl0709

person kazfeist
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nah, it's all good. You could, however, have one of them have an anal preference. With Hermione in the middle. That way you don't really have to do slash, just a bit of oral. :D
person TashaRose
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved this one ... Number 10. I happen to enjoy SS/HG/LM sandwiches. {Grins} I liked how you worked it in with the dream. Maybe Scenario 11 will be an actual with the three of them. {Chuckles}
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you kept the triad a dream, since there was a bit in one of the earlier chapters about how Lucius hates to share. You'd have to deal with Lucius's jealousies first. I like that Hermione has a rampant horny streak for hours afterwards, and that Lucius didn't manage to eavesdrop on their conversation for once.

Oh, in the prior chapter, I think it's a hoot that Draco knocks very loudly and announces himself before entering any room. A bonus is that it's a reasonable reaction to the situation
person Sygnus
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot.... Love the idea of both the dark knight and the princess of light together!!!!
person slytheringirl
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omgg!!!
this is like so intence u havee to add snape
im like dying for another chapter
sg
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You haven't lost me xxx

Please add the SS/HG/LM smut xxx

Bring It On!!
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is WOW!! You are an amazing writer. I have done nothing but read almost all of your stories in about a weeks time and I was so into the stories that I didn't review them yet but I do plan on going back and reviewing each one. I still have a couple left to read. I decided to review this one as it is still in progress. I'm not sure I like the triad plot with this story. I like the dynamic of Hermine and Lucius too much. However, that being said I don't think it would hurt to have Snape join in once in awhile and I do hope that Ginny comes into the story again, I enjoy her 'friendship' with Lucius. I also think you would do a stupendous job on a separate triad story.
person Lilandra
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like your story a lot, so will defenately continue reading, whichever way you decide to go. Personally, I would like to read some hm/lm/ss action, but not on a permanent basis. Just something Lucius introduces her to, a new variety so to speak, but it doesn't need to grow into a whole threeway relationship. I think you are a little to far along in the story for that. Severus could be a friend that visits occasionally (who wouldn't like that...) As far as slash goes, I'm not totally against it, but again, I think you are too far along to turn into a real slash story now. I had mixed feelings when Lucius and Severus kissed in Hermiones dream; I think I wouldn't want them to go any further than that.
person hgelman
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very hot! I love the story and I love Snape. This gives me the best of both worlds!
person sentineljandb
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see these three together! It doesn

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